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Don't take this the wrong way, but it was pretty basic... i'm not saying this to be mean though.
Practise makes perfect! =D -- keep it up
(P.S - No one has actually seen a REAL vampire, except some loony people, which then they could be killed by guns... but no one can say 'they don't get killed by this and that' because they don't know if they can or not... just because it's what hollywood does, doesn't mean its right. It's just stories passed down centuries, about some weird ass crazy people... then it turned into Vampyres ((<old spelling, so no one shout at me :P )) and so on... sorry for the rant =D )
Have a nice day! ^_^